Well, that seemed like quite an entertaining adventure.
Must have been nice to experience that 'out of comfort zone' visit due to language.
Rex's response to Ricky is priceless, and it is good to read you had a good time. Especially memorable with fear at the end, which you portrayed well, even though as you were writing it obviously survived, still sucked in.
The experiences with Danny and the local turned me off actually. I don't know, just, eh.
Danny was portrayed through your writing as hurt more than anything else, potentially craving actual human contact rather than the forced for sale which would normally be offered. One of the reasons I can't possibly enjoy strip clubs right there, they aren’t doing it for you, it is just... money, really.
Anyway, glad to read that you have a good relationship. Just turned 18 eh', was there ever a point you felt like a cradle snatcher? ;p
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Must have been nice to experience that 'out of comfort zone' visit due to language.
Rex's response to Ricky is priceless, and it is good to read you had a good time. Especially memorable with fear at the end, which you portrayed well, even though as you were writing it obviously survived, still sucked in.
The experiences with Danny and the local turned me off actually. I don't know, just, eh.
Danny was portrayed through your writing as hurt more than anything else, potentially craving actual human contact rather than the forced for sale which would normally be offered. One of the reasons I can't possibly enjoy strip clubs right there, they aren’t doing it for you, it is just... money, really.
Anyway, glad to read that you have a good relationship. Just turned 18 eh', was there ever a point you felt like a cradle snatcher? ;p